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The Girl Who Counted Likes

The Girl Who Counted Likes

A young woman and an old flute player at Bandra Bandstand sunset — Krishna story about social media addiction.
Reading Time: 3 minutes

Aisha Deshmukh’s phone buzzed at 11:47 pm, and she was awake in a second, thumb already unlocking the screen before her eyes had properly opened.

Forty-one likes on the reel she’d posted three hours ago. Yesterday’s beach shot at Juhu had crossed two hundred by this point. She lay back against her pillow and typed the caption again in her head, wondering what word she’d gotten wrong.

By morning she’d checked it nine more times.

Mumbai moved around her the way it always did — the 8:15 fast local packed elbow to elbow, the chai seller at the Andheri platform calling out over the announcement system, a woman beside her adjusting her dupatta with one hand while scrolling with the other. Aisha barely noticed any of it. She was filming the crowd through the train door for a story titled “Mumbai Mornings 🚆✨,” angling her phone so the sunlight caught right.

The video got eighty-six likes. She checked at every red signal on her way to college, at the water cooler between lectures, twice during a lab she was supposed to be attending. Her thumb had a permanent groove where the phone case sat.

That evening she went to Bandra Bandstand for “content” — the sea wall at sunset was reliable, always did well. She found a spot near the rocks, tilted her chin the way she’d practiced, and pressed record.

An old man sat a few feet away on the same wall, a bansuri resting across his knees. He wasn’t playing it. He was just watching the tide come in, the way people used to before phones gave them somewhere else to look. A peacock feather was tucked into the frayed cap beside him, its edge bent from years of being carried in someone’s pocket.

“You have taken forty pictures of the same water,” he said, not turning to look at her. His voice was easy, almost amused, like he already knew the answer.

“I need the right one,” Aisha said, without thinking about why she was explaining herself to a stranger.

“Right for whom?” He picked up the flute now, turned it over once in his hands, set it down again. “Your eyes have seen this sunset. But your mind is already at your phone, waiting to see how many others agree it was beautiful. Tell me — whose approval makes the sun set?”

Aisha didn’t have an answer for that. She looked at her screen instead, at the video paused mid-recording, at her own reflection faint in the black glass.

“The senses pull the mind toward whatever glitters,” he said. “A number on a screen, a sweet, a stranger’s opinion — the mind runs after all of it like a horse that has slipped its reins. This is not new, beta. Arjuna asked this very question once, on a battlefield, of a friend he trusted. He said the mind is restless, impossible to hold — like trying to catch the wind in your hands.”

“And what did his friend say?”

“That the wind can still be tamed. Not by force, all at once — no one masters a wild horse in a single afternoon. Little by little. Practice, and the will to let go of what doesn’t serve you. Not never enjoying the world — just not being ruled by it. A man in control of his senses can sit in the middle of every pleasure and every insult this city offers, and remain the same person underneath. That one is called steady.”

He stood then, tucking the flute under his arm. “Haan, achha sunset today,” he said, glancing once at the orange water, and walked off toward the rocks without waiting for her to reply.

Aisha sat there a long moment, phone still open to the unfinished video. She didn’t delete her account. She didn’t throw the phone into the sea, the way she might have written it in her head five minutes ago, dramatic and clean.

She turned off the notification sound instead — just the sound, nothing else — and slid the phone into the bottom of her bag for the walk back to the station. Marine Drive was busy with the same evening crowd, the same tapri sellers calling out for tea, and for the length of that walk, she didn’t know how many people had liked anything at all.

It felt strange. Not bad. Just strange, like a room after the fan is switched off.

She didn’t check until she was home. Forty-one likes had waited for her the whole time, patient as anything, not going anywhere.

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📖 Story in Brief
A Mumbai college student counts likes on every video she posts, checking her phone at every red signal and every quiet moment of her day. An old man at Bandra Bandstand, a bansuri resting across his knees, asks her whose approval makes the sun set. She doesn't change everything that evening — she just turns off one sound and lets her phone rest at the bottom of her bag for a single walk home.
💡 The Lesson Inside
The mind runs toward whatever glitters — a number, a compliment, a stranger's opinion — the way a horse runs when it slips its reins. That's not a flaw to be ashamed of; it's simply what an untrained mind does. What changes things isn't force or a dramatic goodbye to the phone altogether. It's one small, repeatable choice — turning off a sound, putting the phone somewhere out of reach for an hour — practiced again and again until the mind stops needing the glitter quite so badly.
✨ Words Worth Keeping
Restless
never able to settle or stay still for long, always pulling toward the next thing.
You might say: He was restless all through the meeting, checking his watch every few minutes.
Steady
calm and unaffected, whether things are going well or badly.
You might say: Her voice stayed steady even when the interviewer asked the hardest question.
Reflection
an image of yourself or something else, seen in a surface like glass or water.
You might say: She caught her reflection in the shop window and almost didn't recognise herself.
Approval
a feeling of being accepted or liked by someone else.
You might say: He stopped needing his father's approval for every decision he made.
Tamed
brought under control, made calmer or more manageable.
You might say: Years of practice had tamed his temper, though it still flared occasionally.
🌱 Phrases to Remember
Slipped its reins
lost control, gone in an unexpected direction.
In real life you might say: Her spending had slipped its reins after she got her first salary.
Little by little
gradually, in small steady steps rather than all at once.
In real life you might say: He learned to cook little by little, one dish a week.
Not going anywhere
will still be there later, no need to rush.
In real life you might say: Finish your dinner first, the messages are not going anywhere.
Ruled by
controlled or dominated by something.
In real life you might say: She refused to be ruled by other people's opinions of her work.
Whose approval
a way of asking who really needs to be satisfied.
In real life you might say: Ask yourself whose approval you're really chasing before you change your plans.
📚 Quick Glossary
Beta
a warm Hindi term used by an elder for a younger person, close to "child" or "dear," used with affection rather than formality.
Bansuri
a traditional Indian bamboo flute, often associated with Krishna, known for its soft, breathy tone.
Tapri
a small roadside stall selling tea and snacks, a common and beloved sight across Mumbai's streets.
Haan, achha
Hindi for "yes, good" or "yes, alright" — a common, easy way of agreeing or acknowledging something in conversation.
🎬 See It in Action
1

Restless — He felt restless the whole flight, unable to focus on the book in his lap.

2

Steady — The doctor kept a steady hand throughout the entire procedure.

3

Reflection — She paused at her reflection in the elevator mirror before the interview.

4

Approval — The team waited nervously for their manager's approval on the new design.

5

Tamed — The stray dog was slowly tamed by the children who fed it every evening.

🗣️ Say It Right
Restless
/say it like: REST-less/
Approval
/say it like: uh-PROOV-al/
Bansuri
/say it like: bun-SOO-ree/

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Reflection
Steady
Restless
Approval
calm and unaffected, whether things are going well or badly.
an image of yourself or something else, seen in a surface like glass or water.
never able to settle or stay still for long, always pulling toward the next thing.
a feeling of being accepted or liked by someone else.
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